My in-class discussion was with Michelle. We discussed each other’s thesis and she told me that I should combine my thoughts to make one complete thesis instead of having to different veiws in seperate paragraphs. Michelle also advised me that I could use more quotes and examples of how gangster films are unsafe in my paper. The advice I gave to her were mostly about her grammatical errors. Her paper had strong statistical information in it and I couldn’t help but agree with her thesis.
